23-02-2021, 12:39 PM
Nice track and I like the vocal sound - very stylised, nice effects.
The cymbals are too brash and need smoothing with EQ. There is a "tip up" in the overall frequency response from around 6KHz upwards which is dominating and covering the vocal.
I also feel you could extend the low end of the bass guitar downwards. I appreciate the space left for the kick drum at the moment which is nice, but a more "integrated" low end could work well so maybe shelf EQ on the bass at 70Hz and below.
Great job, but the cymbals detract at the moment.
The cymbals are too brash and need smoothing with EQ. There is a "tip up" in the overall frequency response from around 6KHz upwards which is dominating and covering the vocal.
I also feel you could extend the low end of the bass guitar downwards. I appreciate the space left for the kick drum at the moment which is nice, but a more "integrated" low end could work well so maybe shelf EQ on the bass at 70Hz and below.
Great job, but the cymbals detract at the moment.