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[Raymond_Eilers]

This took me like 1 hour at max here is what I came up with.

[musretr0]

This took me like 1 hour at max here is what I came up with.

Hi Raymond, that's a good attempt in 1 hour. May I suggest you work with it more, it sound a little flat but I encourage you to keep practising.

[Y's Man]

I am no mastering engineer so i will just give my opinion how i hear it, to say this came from my mix is something as its vastly different, i like the direction with the low end, you did well bringing the synth out(my mix is bad) for me the snare and vocal could be a bit more upfront the bass is kind of taking over. I agree with musretr0 kind of flat due to lacking some higher endbrightness