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Hi,

Here is my mix of this song.

Don't hesitate to comment my work.

Good listening

I quite like your mix Fabien! The tones are nice for the most part and what needed highlighting was highlighted.
I'm hearing some low end build-up, most likely from the bass and the reverb/ambience. I would try to clear that up.
I would have used the guitarL instead of the guitarR to be the main, or use both.
The guitarL sounds like it has some rough edit (now I realize! - it was done a long time ago and I would go much less brutally now or actually re-track if needed).
I'm also disappointed that you didn't add any delay or effects on the eyebrows (see my notes in the FAQ about this song).
But these are small nitpicks. All in all, your mix sounds pretty good to me. Good job!

(04-04-2015, 04:26 AM)ptalbot Wrote: [ -> ]I quite like your mix Fabien! The tones are nice for the most part and what needed highlighting was highlighted.
I'm hearing some low end build-up, most likely from the bass and the reverb/ambience. I would try to clear that up.
I would have used the guitarL instead of the guitarR to be the main, or use both.
The guitarL sounds like it has some rough edit (now I realize! - it was done a long time ago and I would go much less brutally now or actually re-track if needed).
I'm also disappointed that you didn't add any delay or effects on the eyebrows (see my notes in the FAQ about this song).
But these are small nitpicks. All in all, your mix sounds pretty good to me. Good job!

Thanks to you. I'm glad you like it.
I made a new mix taking into account your comments. I used the other guitar and I clarified the mix. However I haven't found a delay or anything else that pleases me on the eyebrows. As I'm not a specialist of the effects, I'm not surprised
I hope that you'll prefer this one.

Sounds good Fabien, although you could have kept the panning of the guitar.
But this ones sounds better in any case. Good job!