I enjoyed this a lot. Normally, I do live sound only. Hence I don't have any monitors (mixed this on "HiFi"-Speakers) and had a little bit of trouble with the bass.
Hi Jankoppe - welcome to the forum
Pretty good mix....but i think you are missing a bit of bottom end balance. The bass is probably OK and the snare is good too but maybe your kick is a bit light....so there isn't much groove or movement happening.