Love the drums on this. Shame the vocals are so distorted - quite hard to get them to work nicely. I've tried to go for a big 'windswept' kind of sound, in keeping with the style of music and subject of the song.
Interesting approach you've taken here, always good to hear someone put some thought in and try something different. I like the big crunchy vibe, suits the song well. Some interesting voc effects too, good stuff.
Tha balance is good, The vibe fits the song.
The bass could be a little lower. The snare a little brighter to match more to the hi hat.
Vocals could be a little louder. And guitars too.
Cheers for the feedback manuke and jeremias.
Jeremias, I think you're right - I'll try tweaking it as you suggested.