28-05-2022, 12:23 AM
17-12-2022, 01:59 AM
Hi rvox, you have a really cool, individual sounding drum sound here! I dig the way it works in the chorus especially. I like the "piano - like" quality of your bass tone too.
A few things that could maybe improve the mix:
- The lead vocal is over-deessed. It is lisping quite a bit, so maybe ease back on the de-essing.
- The vocal is also a bit low in level the verses, and could do with some clearing out in the low mids to give it some more clarity. It comes through quite well in the verses, though.
- The kick drum needs some more definition in the mix. It's a little lost overall, but especially in the choruses. Just a little more high end "point" on the kick should help it to poke through some more.
- Maybe tone down the forwardness of the snare a little in the verses, just to give the choruses even more impact.
Nice work!
A few things that could maybe improve the mix:
- The lead vocal is over-deessed. It is lisping quite a bit, so maybe ease back on the de-essing.
- The vocal is also a bit low in level the verses, and could do with some clearing out in the low mids to give it some more clarity. It comes through quite well in the verses, though.
- The kick drum needs some more definition in the mix. It's a little lost overall, but especially in the choruses. Just a little more high end "point" on the kick should help it to poke through some more.
- Maybe tone down the forwardness of the snare a little in the verses, just to give the choruses even more impact.
Nice work!