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Hello, I am new here and this is my mix. I hope you like it and I can get some comments about it.
Thanks in advance ......

Hello, as I said before I am new to this forum and trying to get in touch with colleagues about the different ways of mixing and sound engineering. Can someone please help me with what I need to do because so far my first mix has been heard but no one has commented on it. I didn't like the distorted guitar in the first mix and also the melody guitar didn't have the space I envision for this song, so I did a second mix.

Hey, I've listen to both mix, few things, the delay on the vocal are too much in my opinion, and too much treble on the guitars.

Hi EarWeGo, thanks for your comments. OK I see and hear your point and I have made a new mix with less delay on the voice and less treble on the guitars