30-03-2021, 07:55 PM
02-04-2021, 02:31 AM
This isn't bad work, I just think you need a bit more time with it. If it were me doing some more work on it, I would do the following:
- Scale back the highs on the vocals. I think you were maybe going for airy but it's too much. I spent so much time trying to eliminate that breath that seems to just kind of smash into the song on occasional words but not always.
- Kick drum is a bit "woofy". Might need to sort that out.
- Snare seems heavy but that could be an artifact of the vocals so evaluate when (1) is finished.
- When the cello's come in, they really come in. Maybe automate the entrance to take some edge off
- Get the acoustic guitar out of the way - especially during the cello solo.
27-04-2021, 10:29 PM
Thanks for listening, DiscoDynamo. And thank you for the feedback. You are 100% correct on all five points.