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Here's my go at it:

I may have leaned a bit too hard into the reverbs and FX so I dried it up a bit.

Second version is better. Now everyone put so much reverb on everything, but it's not right (depending). All you have to do - is to listen to the music on tv, radio, internet. Do you hear so much reverb????? I don't think so.....

I listened to the 2nd version first. It sounds good. No real complaints. The snare might be a bit loud. But yea,it seemed fine.

I then listened to the 1st version and expected it to be a lot worst but it was ok too. Yeah, the reverb on the acoustics was a bit much and took up too much sonic real-estate but it still worked. I was going in expecting it to be drowned in reverb. Which may have been cool too if done 'right'.

So yeah, good job.