In my opinion, the music depends a lot on how bright the chorus sounds. I've highlighted the main parts of the song and it has provided a good result.
I will be glad to hear your opinion about the sound and musicality of the mix.
HI equilibrium,
I like the closeness of your mix. It has a really intimate feeling. The biggest thing that jumps out to me is the wooliness of the female vocal. Also, maybe the vox are a bit hot in general on the choruses, and maybe across the whole mix. I really like what you've done, and bringing the band up to the vocals (or the vocals down to the band) could be what this mix needs imho.
Really nice work across the board, and I feel like you are super close to a really tight, warm, exciting mix!
Draper
Interesting approach. I would agree on the hollow/woolly character of the female vocal. Other than that it is a good listen. Good use of piano.