02-11-2013, 02:53 PM
02-11-2013, 03:44 PM
The upper mids low highs seem a bit strong on the vocals and maybe the HH could come down a bit.
02-11-2013, 04:57 PM
The difrence between verse and chorus are fine.
I dont agree on the eq, theres too much in the hi middle area, voice and hihat in particular.
I know it is possible to make it sound more dreamy and warm, and I know you have those beautiful long verbs.
For instance the "ahahah" background vocals like that :-)
And the solo has got lots of it - little too much perhaps, as its the only verb now
Guitars sound fine, so does the drums(apart from the hat) and bas. I think the tinklish vocals and hat are the first place ones to get on the workbench
The voicesynth part are cool level in middle piece. Solo could do with a little more middle (3-500)and a little more volume to win the fight with the voicesynth level (or voice synth could go under guitar when it kicks in)
I dont agree on the eq, theres too much in the hi middle area, voice and hihat in particular.
I know it is possible to make it sound more dreamy and warm, and I know you have those beautiful long verbs.
For instance the "ahahah" background vocals like that :-)
And the solo has got lots of it - little too much perhaps, as its the only verb now
Guitars sound fine, so does the drums(apart from the hat) and bas. I think the tinklish vocals and hat are the first place ones to get on the workbench
The voicesynth part are cool level in middle piece. Solo could do with a little more middle (3-500)and a little more volume to win the fight with the voicesynth level (or voice synth could go under guitar when it kicks in)
03-11-2013, 08:50 PM
hope you like....
Sergio
Sergio
04-11-2013, 01:23 PM
(03-11-2013, 08:50 PM)flyrecords Wrote: [ -> ]hope you like....
Sergio
Hi Sergio
The idea I get with this track is that it has to have a "dreamy" feel.
In your mix it's not the case, which doesn't make it wrong.
It just takes away what I think was the original "feel" the artist wanted to create.
Refering to the second mix you've posted:
Technicaly I think that the bass is too strong in your mix, vocals sound too dry and upfront in the mix at times. The "s's" also seem to "clip".
Try de-essing your vocals.
But on a positive note. I like your perspective of the track and apart from the bass and vocals the rest of the instruments sound pretty well balanced!
Regards
Gerrit
04-11-2013, 03:55 PM
Thanks Gerrit!!
09-11-2013, 05:27 PM
Hello
Few points I noticed.
Bass might have too dominant role and it is masking kick.
You should check your lead voc s-limit if you have one in chain. Could be just small adjustment to the key freq.
During chorus I think there is room to make band louder and still keep lead voc up front.
And at the end those parts without lead voc you could boost instruments.
Few points I noticed.
Bass might have too dominant role and it is masking kick.
You should check your lead voc s-limit if you have one in chain. Could be just small adjustment to the key freq.
During chorus I think there is room to make band louder and still keep lead voc up front.
And at the end those parts without lead voc you could boost instruments.