19-05-2019, 02:26 PM
25-05-2019, 10:33 PM
I'm not a pro, so others might have better suggestions, but here are a few comments in case you would find them useful:
- Nice width!
- There's an annoying hum at the begging of the song.
- It seems that vocal plosives sneaked through too much.
- The vocal timbre and dynamics are inconsistent and produce together with the reverb a weird effect (esp. audible during first chorus).
- The figurative guitar overpowers the vocal a bit.
- It is great how in all other places, despite how loud other instruments are, the vocal doesn't get buried – it is prominent and clearly leads the song.
- It is mainly a matter of taste, but IMO the cymbals and hi-hat are too low.
- You have put so much energy into guitars
, that the snare can't keep up 
(its transient/attack seems too weak).
- I like how the bass and kick share low frequencies.
13-06-2019, 10:07 PM
(25-05-2019, 10:33 PM)dtldarek Wrote: [ -> ]I'm not a pro, so others might have better suggestions, but here are a few comments in case you would find them useful:
- Nice width!
- There's an annoying hum at the begging of the song.
- It seems that vocal plosives sneaked through too much.
- The vocal timbre and dynamics are inconsistent and produce together with the reverb a weird effect (esp. audible during first chorus).
- The figurative guitar overpowers the vocal a bit.
- It is great how in all other places, despite how loud other instruments are, the vocal doesn't get buried – it is prominent and clearly leads the song.
- It is mainly a matter of taste, but IMO the cymbals and hi-hat are too low.
- You have put so much energy into guitars
- I like how the bass and kick share low frequencies.
Thanks for your tips. I´ll try to improve it.