Hi,
Here's my mix. Comments welcomed.
Thanks.
Update: New Mix Added.
I've updated the original post with a brand new mix - 'Mix 2'.
Thanks.
It looks tight. But it seems to me, that the spacing of the instruments are too much varied to sit together well. Also I would limit the snare a bit.
Thanks for the comments. Yeah you are right. I might have another go at this. Seems an age ago since I mixed this, when I had even less of a clue what I was doing than the little I know now!