11-03-2019, 07:13 PM
15-03-2019, 09:05 AM
Slight tweaks for V2.
15-03-2019, 01:25 PM
I just listened to V2. It sounds good. The 2nd guitar on the right seems a little brighter than guitar 1 and it makes it feel louder/closer than the other instruments. Bringing it down or taking some of the harshness out of the guitar might balance things out better. I could use a little more vocal. It sounds "shy". I've used that description on a few versions of this song and I think it's natural to have it drop back with the band a bit but it needs that extra kick of volume/excitement to put it in the spotlight. At least that's what I think.
15-03-2019, 02:40 PM
Thanks, Roy. Valuable feedback. Vocal should be a bit more forward in V1 but let me revisit both guitar and voice and upload V3.
15-03-2019, 07:58 PM
V3 uploaded, should fix the issues mentioned above.
19-03-2019, 07:03 PM
Good guitars. I think the vocal needs to lead in places where the the guitars do at times. However, this is very nicely presented.