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Hey Guys

I had a bash at this, and i will have to say i thought looking at track count it was going to be easy, how wrong i was.

anyway lemme know where i can improve on this Thanks in advance

cheers

Mix no 2 up (04/19)

let me know people

cheers

Tonally, it feels fine. Nothing hash and totally listenable. I think the vocal is pretty loud compared to everything else on the track and takes away from the dynamics. In terms of instruments there isn't a lot going on so it really needs to take advantage of dynamics and contrast in level between sections to add to the excitement and another dimension to the song.

Hope that helps.

mix no 2 is up, as always let me know

Good energy and some interesting arrangement ideas. It is very mono which I was not expecting. Bass guitar has some weirdness I'm not sure I can handle. I do like the vocal.