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Hey,
This is my attempt to mix this nice track

I’m listening to your mix on the grotboxes in my office right now, and I have a couple of comments:

• The bass is almost unhearable; this may in large part be the fault of the speakers but you could try adding some harmonics to make them stand out more on quality-challenged speakers.
  
• Sometimes, mostly at drum fills, the drums are a bit too loud and overpower more important instruments.
  
• The snare has a resonance ringing that I don’t like.
  

Apart from that it’s a very nice mix already!