Nice song here. I tried to respect a few rules: do all the EQ in mono, pan later. Keep it simple and balanced ...
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I think your mix here is pretty good. The dynamics natural and effective. I think your mix would be better represented if you uploaded a 320 kbps version of it. It would make a big difference, I believe.
Great sounding mix. A little bit too dry for my taste. But its better to do it dry than to sink it in reverb.