Here is my attempt.
KWether
Nice mix kmwether!Keys are to low on the mix and i found the vocals a LOT wet!Overall warm and very nice mix!
Nice sounding mix, i like how you have given this great song your own feel !
I agree with gopner ,especially wet vocal effects compared to the music
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Thanks for the feedback. I made the adjustments.
Nice one , sounds like the vocal it could come down a touch !
Nice improvement.I found keys a little honky and vocals on the edge of loudness now.
Definitely better now though!
I like it. Nice balance.
I liked the overall sound in the first mix is more smooth and natural. Did you add reverb to horns with second mix?
In the second mix vocals are in different space that horns. Vocal sounds like big living room, and horns like a church. Maybe you could try little less reverb but bigger space.
I liked v1 quite well, my criticism was only very small harshness in the vocal (reverb tone I think), and maybe it would sound better a bit wider. Balance is good, guitar level sounds just right.
v2, as Olli H has said, that vocal verb is too short - it should match the hall length I believe.