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This my version of my mix, any input positive or negative would be greatly appreciated. Currently a student for Audio Production, so I'm learning.

Listening to this mix, I can't figure out what you were trying to do with it. My first impression was too much environment on the drums and vocals. I also think you could pay more attention to finding the sweet spots of each instrument. Try to draw as much character and tone from each source and put those into your mix. A lot of unrealized potential yet in your mix.
keep at it.