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Here is Version 1 of this lovely song ,needs more work any advice welcome !
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(17-08-2015, 12:39 PM)thedon Wrote: [ -> ]Here is Version 1 of this lovely song ,needs more work any advice welcome !
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Hey Don - man you've managed to generate a lot of urgency with your drums. Makes for a rollicking good ride, especially as the song builds towards the final solo and close. Nice. Maybe the snare rim shots during the intro could come down a bit - Its hard to tell as I'm listening in cans but I'm having problems listening to them with the volume cranked.

Cheers, Simon

(17-08-2015, 02:02 PM)HbGuitar Wrote: [ -> ]

(17-08-2015, 12:39 PM)thedon Wrote: [ -> ]Here is Version 1 of this lovely song ,needs more work any advice welcome !
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Hey Don - man you've managed to generate a lot of urgency with your drums. Makes for a rollicking good ride, especially as the song builds towards the final solo and close. Nice. Maybe the snare rim shots during the intro could come down a bit - Its hard to tell as I'm listening in cans but I'm having problems listening to them with the volume cranked.

Cheers, Simon

Thanks Simon
Yes im finding the the snare is real challenge, I will keep on working on it !
Cheers

I like it. Nice sound, good balances.

Somethings came to my mind:
Something brute with snare sound. I wonder if the drummer is hitting too hard the snare when compared to the touch of guitars.
I wonder if the stereo effect (modulation?) in bass is too strong now? Just a little bit less, and the bass would be more focused and in the same sonic space.

(26-08-2015, 10:29 AM)Olli H Wrote: [ -> ]I like it. Nice sound, good balances.

Somethings came to my mind:
Something brute with snare sound. I wonder if the drummer is hitting too hard the snare when compared to the touch of guitars.
I wonder if the stereo effect (modulation?) in bass is too strong now? Just a little bit less, and the bass would be more focused and in the same sonic space.

Thanks olli I Agree ,Really like this song and Going to try another remix .

Hi thedon nice vibe the only thing I would say is the rim hits at the beginning is a little loud,well done.

(28-08-2015, 04:28 AM)Cudjoe Wrote: [ -> ]Hi thedon nice vibe the only thing I would say is the rim hits at the beginning is a little loud,well done.

Thanks ,will sort out out the rims in version 2 !

Cool . Like the balance across everything. Its quite a narrow mix for my taste I would pan things out a bit more even though the el. gtr does widen things a bit toward the end. Also I think the reverb combined with the narrow stereo is pushing everything into the distance a bit. Having said that I think you've achieved a good illusion of a room

(03-09-2015, 08:14 AM)Nos Wrote: [ -> ]Cool . Like the balance across everything. Its quite a narrow mix for my taste I would pan things out a bit more even though the el. gtr does widen things a bit toward the end. Also I think the reverb combined with the narrow stereo is pushing everything into the distance a bit. Having said that I think you've achieved a good illusion of a room

Thanks For having a listen and feedback !
Hopefully version 2 will sound much better ,After listening to yours and other mixes !

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