things that stand out to me:
You are using too much bottom snare.. so it's missing that snap and punch of a real snare.
and the other is the highs on the overheads are a lil too much. they sound to over processed in a bad way.
all in all definitely an improvement over the previous ones. good job.
I completely agree with Shul on the snare and overheads.
Additionally I would say that the mix would deserve more energy in general. This is a quite strong and energetic song, so from a musical point of view I would try to carry over that energy into the mix. Bigger in every aspect might be a good description. Especially the guitars are lacking that energy at least in some parts - it's better in the mid-section.