Simplemachine - Ingloria

[brady85]

This Song touched me... I have some experience with suicide so I even got a little emotional.

The song is great, mixed itself almost, great recording, and those vocals....just wow!

so this is my mix, please let me know what you think.

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v2 mix


did some fixes

gave the drums a little more ambience.

the vocals have a little more low end.

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V3

Made the drums a little more punchy
intro voice mail a little more audible
cello's are a little wider.
did some panning for the violins and Guitars

[supep]

Hi!
Really good job!
For my taste, maybe, the vocals needs a bit more body on 100Hz aprox.
And the bass, maybe needs a bit more impact on the same range.
Nice!

[brady85]

yep agree! fixed it in version 2

[401kBC]

yep agree! fixed it in version 2

Very nice mix!

I like how the vocals are more dry and forward in your mix. It portrays the dark mood of the song well. Good balance with everything

If I was gonna be picky, the guitars and orchestras could benefit being panned more dramatic left and right, so to not distract from the Vocals.
thats being picky, I much enjoyed your mix

I know what you mean about this song touching you, I lost a friend a few months ago and this song reminded me of them. anyways keep up the good work!

[Quathamer]

Yo, hows it going?

Hey, this is a pretty sweet mix. I feel like there's a pleasing vibe to this mix, and its nice to listen to.

That been said, there are a few points I have that could improve your mix from were I'm sitting.

The intro voicemail is a little too underneath the violins.
Nice vocals, and I really enjoy the space in the drums, but they aren't as punchy as the drummer is trying to play them.
The big crescendo drop at the end was a little bit of a letdown. All the elements are there, but its just missing that gusto!

I Hope these points are helpful mate!

[brady85]

yep agree! fixed it in version 2

Very nice mix!

I like how the vocals are more dry and forward in your mix. It portrays the dark mood of the song well. Good balance with everything

If I was gonna be picky, the guitars and orchestras could benefit being panned more dramatic left and right, so to not distract from the Vocals.
thats being picky, I much enjoyed your mix

I know what you mean about this song touching you, I lost a friend a few months ago and this song reminded me of them. anyways keep up the good work!

Thank you ! and good tips, made a v3

[brady85]

Yo, hows it going?

Hey, this is a pretty sweet mix. I feel like there's a pleasing vibe to this mix, and its nice to listen to.

That been said, there are a few points I have that could improve your mix from were I'm sitting.

The intro voicemail is a little too underneath the violins.
Nice vocals, and I really enjoy the space in the drums, but they aren't as punchy as the drummer is trying to play them.
The big crescendo drop at the end was a little bit of a letdown. All the elements are there, but its just missing that gusto!

I Hope these points are helpful mate!

thanks for listening.

I agree, i fixed some stuff in v3