Whitten And. Williams - How To Make A Mirror

[Judders]

Lots to like in this mix, I don't mind the vocal panning at all, it's kinda cool.

The one thing that jumps out at me is the bass flute masking the vocals.  Lots of overlap in similar territory.

Thanks.  Is it just the low mids of the bass flute and vocal that you feel are clashing a bit too much?

Cheers!

Hey, sorry for the late reply.

Yes, low mid territory.

[WhittenAnd]

Hi,

My attempt.  One with added beat, one without.

Cheers!

Update: Added v 1.0

Speaking of late replies :P

Just listened to the 1.0 with beat, I love the way it frames the slightly zany rythms into a kinda funky context. And the... best word I can think of is 'turkey sound' that tails lines sometimes gels really nicely with the whistles for me, gives the whole thing a proper birdsong shine. Thanks so much!

[mikej]

Hah yes...  That sound .   It's the tremolo call of the Common Loon Bird! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4UrCRcZ8Pas
(Was also used by 808 State - Pacific 202, back in 1989).

Cheers!!