There's so much to like here

[Krabbe]

What a great song, and excellent tracks. True pleasure.
I found it rather difficult to get the overall feeling quite right. It's not there yet, but it's a start. Maybe I want more drum kit and more vocals ... yeah, I don't know.
Tips, trics and comments are most welcomed

Update version 2
I've changed a lot of .. nothing major, some balancing here, a compressor setting ... overall, I feel much better with this version. To me it feels less ... strained, perhaps?

Update v3
Played around with some automation

[Roy]

I'm still feeling this song out so it's hard to comment. I think the energy seems to drop a little at what I think is the first chorus. It might be a compression thing. I think overall it could 'breath' a bit more. The bass may be a little hot. But those are some general thoughts. My ears might be tired at this point.

[Krabbe]

I'm still feeling this song out so it's hard to comment. I think the energy seems to drop a little at what I think is the first chorus. It might be a compression thing. I think overall it could 'breath' a bit more. The bass may be a little hot. But those are some general thoughts. My ears might be tired at this point.

Thanks

First, the bass IS hot  Nah, I've split the bass and the hi-chan has, among other stuff, some distortion, guess I've balanced poorly, 'cause it was only supposed to cut thru, not be really audible.

I have some general dynamic issues. However. I do not believe that it's due to compression; apart from some parallel compression here and there, I'm squeezing at -3dB when it's really crazy.  

I agree that it could breathe more, I want it to breathe more, I'm just ... well, I guess, I'm thiking about how to make it more ... airy without just going through the roof with HF ...

[Shul]

I find the vocals way too loud for the rest of the mix... it's a pop song but go easy on those faders keep it up.

[Krabbe]

Thanks for your time. I think you're right