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Hannes Keseberg - YouKnowBetter_3ee mix2
#11
(14-01-2019, 04:38 PM)Olli H Wrote: Sounds smooth and balanced, like a record.

Maybe something with snare in the chorus. It’s sort of near and far at the same time. Or it feels a bit like street bumb. And now that I listen my version I seem to have the same problem.

I guess I need to mult the snare and treat it differently from the rim-stick ... things are maybe tricky because the kick hits at the same time as the snare also .. that's maybe why the "street bump"? Big Grin
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#12
Hi 3ee! Here are the main issues that occurred to me:
  • Nice laid-back vibe overall, but it doesn't demand the listener's attention as much as I'd expect of a single. Whether you want to address that with arrangement or automation is up to you.
  • Generally very solid balancing, and tasteful effects. Like the solo-guitar delay particularly.
  • The small-speaker bass translation could be better.
  • The rhythm guitar and lead vox are both quite ambient, ie. the reverb feels a bit too obvious. Is it too bright?
  • Cymbal crashes a bit harsh in the midrange. From the middle-section onwards, I felt they conflicted a bit with the the lead vocal
  • The rising guitar line leading into the outro section feels a bit edgy tonally. I think it's some resonances in the 2-3kHz region.

Like that version a lot -- gets us off to a flying start! Smile Thanks for getting involved 3ee!
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#13
^ Hi Mike, many thanks for the feedback, all good points, will consider them carefully towards the next version.

-most certainly will do arrangement tweaks and automation!
-Thanks!
-I didn't mix with that in mind, we'll see if I can resolve the bass with an overdrive parallel or something, any other tips on this? (used to use Waves Rbass in the past but I ditched all Waves plugins some time back due to their complications)
-Will tweak ambiance... it does feel a bit too wet on some elements but I'm not really sure at the moment what's "wrong"
-Was hard to get a good snare sound and tame cymbals at the same time, I guess automation is the answer here.
-will tame the slide gtr resonances
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#14
(15-01-2019, 06:29 PM)3ee Wrote: ^ Hi Mike, many thanks for the feedback, all good points, will consider them carefully towards the next version.

Great -- although remember that I'm only one of three judges... Wink

Quote:-I didn't mix with that in mind, we'll see if I can resolve the bass with an overdrive parallel or something, any other tips on this? (used to use Waves Rbass in the past but I ditched all Waves plugins some time back due to their complications)

Ditto Rolleyes Parallel distortion is certainly a favourite of mine, but you might also be able to just compress the upper-spectrum frequencies and bring them up in level once they're more consistent.

Quote:-Will tweak ambiance... it does feel a bit too wet on some elements but I'm not really sure at the moment what's "wrong"

No right or wrong answers here, but referencing is the key for me.

Quote:-Was hard to get a good snare sound and tame cymbals at the same time, I guess automation is the answer here.

I seem to remember I used a dynamic EQ to boost the HF of the level peaks, while leaving the spill un-EQ'd. Or you could slip in a sneaky supplementary sample layer for that. Ah... options, options... Smile

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#15
mix2 (possibly final mix) is now up! Smile
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#16
Congrats man.....great job Smile
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#17
Great mix! Congrats!
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#18
Great sounding mix, well deserved win. Smile
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#19
Great mix, well done and congrats on the win!
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#20
Well Done Congratulations !

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