16-05-2016, 02:43 AM
Not a bad effort, but there's a few things that could be better I think:
- The overall sound is rather dull and low-end heavy. Some top-end air would help the mix, I think.
- The acoustic could use some low shelf/high pass, they sound rather muddy
- You did some tuning of the vocals (which was called for, I know), but have completely changed the melody of the 'ah ah' after the verses, which is not for the better. You could listen to the reference mix to get an idea of the intended melody.
- at 3:15 before the chorus reprise, I don't know what happened but there's a blank that sounds quite odd.
- the mix sound rather mono-ish, I'm wishing for some width that is lacking here.
Overall, some work to do still to get a more agreeable mix. Keep it up!
- The overall sound is rather dull and low-end heavy. Some top-end air would help the mix, I think.
- The acoustic could use some low shelf/high pass, they sound rather muddy
- You did some tuning of the vocals (which was called for, I know), but have completely changed the melody of the 'ah ah' after the verses, which is not for the better. You could listen to the reference mix to get an idea of the intended melody.
- at 3:15 before the chorus reprise, I don't know what happened but there's a blank that sounds quite odd.
- the mix sound rather mono-ish, I'm wishing for some width that is lacking here.
Overall, some work to do still to get a more agreeable mix. Keep it up!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here