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Four Graham - Olli H
#1
I enjoyed mixing this one. Hopefully it can be also heard in my mix.

Multitracks had some real life challenges, but that's part of the fun: to find ways to fix them.

I tried to make thing loud and raw and natural, but still smooth. My main reference for stylistical choises was Chris Lord-Alge's mix of American Idiot (Green Day)


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#2
I read your reply to my post, but I had to reply here first because I also used American Idiot as a reference for this song haha. I thought I was the only person that used it as a punk rock reference. I definitely think it's one of the best for this style of music, and I also occasionally use paramore (the older songs) for references too.

I think you did a great job on this mix. It's definitely closer to American Idiot than my mix! I can't really hear anything that I dislike. If I had to suggest something, it might be to make the toms a little punchier like your snare. Nice job though because it sounds great.
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#3
Well, I used Green Day, too Big Grin But I am still tweaking the mix, the vocals are pretty challening.

Some tips:

1. You're mix feels pretty dry. Especially the snare and the vocals. Some reverb and delay would help your mix.

2. Your taste might be different than mine, but I think your vocal/snare balance isn't that optimal. Maybe turn the snare a bit down and the vocals up.

3. You should definitely automate the vocal. Sometimes it gets very quiet.
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#4
Thanks for listening

(18-03-2016, 05:14 PM)J.D.Redbeard Wrote: 1. You're mix feels pretty dry. Especially the snare and the vocals. Some reverb and delay would help your mix.
It's dry, but I happen to have my dry days now, so it turned out this way this time.

(18-03-2016, 05:14 PM)J.D.Redbeard Wrote: 2. Your taste might be different than mine, but I think your vocal/snare balance isn't that optimal. Maybe turn the snare a bit down and the vocals up.
Probably true. I did many quick automations to drums, so I guess that the balances are bit different in each part. Sometimes better, sometimes worse.

(18-03-2016, 05:14 PM)J.D.Redbeard Wrote: 3. You should definitely automate the vocal. Sometimes it gets very quiet.
That's very true. I should have also used more eq automation on it, for the sound of vocalist changes too much. Maybe different takes in different days caused that.

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#5
Love this mix Olli!

I'm half way through my own rough mix and virtually abandoned it ..... original vox tracks are .....i cant think of a polite description....difficult to pull together

Having listened to your version i feel inspired again!

Cheers, Simon
Be fierce in your encouragement, kind in your criticism and try and remember that the art of a good critique is not to make someone else's mix sound like yours...but to help the mixer realize their own vision.

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#6
Thanks
I'll certainly will comment your mix when it comes here, if I only happen to notice it.
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#7
hi bro, looks like we have the same CLA style to aprroach our mixes Smile
so anyway i think your mix need more guitarss, i can only feel the guitar groove up untill around 0:36 and from there its like the guitarist is a shy guy playing behind the drummer in a concert Smile . its kinda hard to bring up the guitars up so its doesnt eat up the vocal area maybe sidechaining and automate it sometimes work. anyways nice aproach for CLA style , cheers bro good work
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#8
Like it! Love how it goes into to the pre-chorus bit
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#9
Hi !

My main concern here is the drums/bass placement. They need a lot of edition to match the grid better.
Otherwise, drums and bass are too much loud. Vocals are too much behind the band.
Overall EQ is a bit shiny to my taste, but as your reference was made in the years of loudness, I guess it may explain why.

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#10
Hey olli

*I agree there is quite some low end build up in your mix. I would keep that bass on check.
*vocal has a nasty freq. Resonating at around 1khz.
*balance is good.
*separation is good.

Overall good mix. Good job.
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