Hey there! Well u got there a nice mix. As mainly everything but the drums in this song is quite easy to work with it's relatively easy to get that 
. To my taste there could be a bit more of low end. What i see wrong is:
1st. U have pushed the mix way too loud so it distorts, check from 2:03 to 2:35, it's pretty clear there.
2nd. The compressor you have on ur master is working wrong. It works quite fast and with the kick drum making the whole mix swing up and down when it hits. U can reset ur comp so it works if u are ok with the loudness of ur kick (wich i find ok, but maybe i like loud kicks hehe) or push back the kick so it doesnt make the comp work like that....I presonally will try the 1st one and then the 2nd if that doesnt work, but it's up to you.
It'd be nice to check phasing issues with the snare as it may have a lil bit weird resonance around 450 hz...
Hope that helps
Ak3r
. To my taste there could be a bit more of low end. What i see wrong is:1st. U have pushed the mix way too loud so it distorts, check from 2:03 to 2:35, it's pretty clear there.
2nd. The compressor you have on ur master is working wrong. It works quite fast and with the kick drum making the whole mix swing up and down when it hits. U can reset ur comp so it works if u are ok with the loudness of ur kick (wich i find ok, but maybe i like loud kicks hehe) or push back the kick so it doesnt make the comp work like that....I presonally will try the 1st one and then the 2nd if that doesnt work, but it's up to you.
It'd be nice to check phasing issues with the snare as it may have a lil bit weird resonance around 450 hz...
Hope that helps
Ak3r