05-09-2021, 02:38 PM
Hmm let's see here...
I feel like the vocal is too thin. The orig vocal recording lacks some bottom end so don't be afraid to add some more. In the first verse there's a delay on the right side that's a little distracting. You could either turn it down, make it darker, add some reverb to it or all of the above.
You could totally turn the vocal parts of song down a bit to make the instrumental section stand out more. Especially the transition from first Drop to the second verse feels little jarring since the bass in the verse is actually louder than in the Drop.
Your kick sounds are great and so is the overall amount of top and bottom end at least with the instruments.
I feel like the vocal is too thin. The orig vocal recording lacks some bottom end so don't be afraid to add some more. In the first verse there's a delay on the right side that's a little distracting. You could either turn it down, make it darker, add some reverb to it or all of the above.
You could totally turn the vocal parts of song down a bit to make the instrumental section stand out more. Especially the transition from first Drop to the second verse feels little jarring since the bass in the verse is actually louder than in the Drop.
Your kick sounds are great and so is the overall amount of top and bottom end at least with the instruments.