03-04-2020, 06:22 AM
Hey Mammy!
I think you have a really solid base so far! I like your treatment of the synths, and the fact that you brought the drum machine forward, vs the samples.
I think a little more work on the vocals could be beneficial. A little more compression, some auto tune if you have access to it (don't worry, neither Carol nor I will be offended, we know they're off), and using the lower female voice during the second verse.
Maybe a little bit of buss compression pumping from the bass could get a little bit of extra motion in there too.
I like the work you've done, keep it up!
Draper
I think you have a really solid base so far! I like your treatment of the synths, and the fact that you brought the drum machine forward, vs the samples.
I think a little more work on the vocals could be beneficial. A little more compression, some auto tune if you have access to it (don't worry, neither Carol nor I will be offended, we know they're off), and using the lower female voice during the second verse.
Maybe a little bit of buss compression pumping from the bass could get a little bit of extra motion in there too.
I like the work you've done, keep it up!
Draper