31-03-2020, 08:38 PM
03-04-2020, 06:22 AM
Hey Mammy!
I think you have a really solid base so far! I like your treatment of the synths, and the fact that you brought the drum machine forward, vs the samples.
I think a little more work on the vocals could be beneficial. A little more compression, some auto tune if you have access to it (don't worry, neither Carol nor I will be offended, we know they're off), and using the lower female voice during the second verse.
Maybe a little bit of buss compression pumping from the bass could get a little bit of extra motion in there too.
I like the work you've done, keep it up!
Draper
I think you have a really solid base so far! I like your treatment of the synths, and the fact that you brought the drum machine forward, vs the samples.
I think a little more work on the vocals could be beneficial. A little more compression, some auto tune if you have access to it (don't worry, neither Carol nor I will be offended, we know they're off), and using the lower female voice during the second verse.
Maybe a little bit of buss compression pumping from the bass could get a little bit of extra motion in there too.
I like the work you've done, keep it up!
Draper
03-04-2020, 07:18 PM
thanks for listening and comments man .cheers!
05-04-2020, 07:08 PM
I thought this mix a nice open feeling. The main instruments had space and everything could be heard well. I wonder if it could have hit a bit harder in the low end, but that maybe was a different feel than you were going for. I agree the vocals could have used some more processing, including compression and tuning. They weren't the easiest tracks to work with.