Difficult mix, but here it is

[k14studios]

I like that you've done some creative editing. It changes the whole dynamic of the song. I'm not too crazy about the overall mix though. The levels seem balanced and the stereo field seems well rounded, but the EQ needs some serious work. The high end is way over the top. It almost sounds like I've got a blown cone and the driver for the tweeter is the only thing still working. Are you by any chance mixing on headphones?