I just listened to V2. It sounds good. The 2nd guitar on the right seems a little brighter than guitar 1 and it makes it feel louder/closer than the other instruments. Bringing it down or taking some of the harshness out of the guitar might balance things out better. I could use a little more vocal. It sounds "shy". I've used that description on a few versions of this song and I think it's natural to have it drop back with the band a bit but it needs that extra kick of volume/excitement to put it in the spotlight. At least that's what I think.
It doesn't have to sound good. People just need to think it sounds good.