Hello Don
Overall I think this is good but can be improved.
*Mix is rather thin sounding. perhaps a bit more mids will help to get a better body/fullersound on it.
*Only separation I hear is on the toms, which I believe that's why takka feels they are so separate from the snare and kick.
Everything else is centered and I feel your mix is drowning. Perhaps that's why you boosted some highs here and there?
*Bass has some fret noise here and there. Unless you purposely eq'ed it like that? But it jumps out in my opinion.
*Vocals sound nice and clean
*at 1:51 it lacks the power I would have wanted from those guitars. perhaps a boost in volume? or more fullness in the eq. or both.
Not an easy mix if you ask me but I think you are on the right track.
Hope this helps.
Overall I think this is good but can be improved.
*Mix is rather thin sounding. perhaps a bit more mids will help to get a better body/fullersound on it.
*Only separation I hear is on the toms, which I believe that's why takka feels they are so separate from the snare and kick.
Everything else is centered and I feel your mix is drowning. Perhaps that's why you boosted some highs here and there?
*Bass has some fret noise here and there. Unless you purposely eq'ed it like that? But it jumps out in my opinion.
*Vocals sound nice and clean
*at 1:51 it lacks the power I would have wanted from those guitars. perhaps a boost in volume? or more fullness in the eq. or both.
Not an easy mix if you ask me but I think you are on the right track.
Hope this helps.