Hello.
Sorry, I'm afraid your mix is very bright. It would translate really bad in most systems. I'm currently using cheap headphones and your mix feels like it has an excess of highs. Between the 8khz and above.
it seems well balanced and from what I hear you got the separation but you definitely need to fix that excess of highs and boost more low end on this.
A great deal of the vibe of this song comes from the low end.
Hope this helps.
Sorry, I'm afraid your mix is very bright. It would translate really bad in most systems. I'm currently using cheap headphones and your mix feels like it has an excess of highs. Between the 8khz and above.
it seems well balanced and from what I hear you got the separation but you definitely need to fix that excess of highs and boost more low end on this.
A great deal of the vibe of this song comes from the low end.
Hope this helps.