08-04-2016, 08:34 PM
That's some monstrous low end you got there cube3! 
The sustained notes on the bass are really taking a toll on smaller speakers and clouding everything with them...
I would dial that back a good notch, perhaps cut some sustain as well...
The vocals are a bit muffled and could use some air.
Drums are a tad too compressed (I hear it in the cymbals mostly, so perhaps you could use some parallel compression and remove the high end from the send to a parallel compressor?)
Tones are not bad overal, balance is fine so if you start by clearing the low end, you should have a reasonable mix...
Oh and the end should really be a fade out, it doesn't make much sense to end it like that!
The sustained notes on the bass are really taking a toll on smaller speakers and clouding everything with them...
I would dial that back a good notch, perhaps cut some sustain as well...
The vocals are a bit muffled and could use some air.
Drums are a tad too compressed (I hear it in the cymbals mostly, so perhaps you could use some parallel compression and remove the high end from the send to a parallel compressor?)
Tones are not bad overal, balance is fine so if you start by clearing the low end, you should have a reasonable mix...
Oh and the end should really be a fade out, it doesn't make much sense to end it like that!
"Music, in performance, is a type of sculpture. The air in the performance is sculpted into something." - Frank Zappa
Some air moved here
Some air moved here