Hello there
A few observations:
*You are missing the kick throughout most of the song. So overall drums need more work.
*Guitars are louder than vocals. You need to turn it up so the vocal doesn't sink in the mix.
This is a really hard song to mix (I struggled with it my self) just because of the recording quality. If you are new to mixing I would pick a different song to gain more experience before coming back to this one.
A few observations:
*You are missing the kick throughout most of the song. So overall drums need more work.
*Guitars are louder than vocals. You need to turn it up so the vocal doesn't sink in the mix.
This is a really hard song to mix (I struggled with it my self) just because of the recording quality. If you are new to mixing I would pick a different song to gain more experience before coming back to this one.