Hi there! Nice mix yours too 
. The first thing that surprises me is that u choose to put the clean guitar on the left...as beeing just 1 guitar the usual should be to put it in the center...otherwise seems a little weird but i guess that's more an artistic choice than any other thing.
You should also check for some resonances on the bass like at 1:16 is very clear.
The Snare could have a bit more attack but that's the tricky part of this song. But dont worry, u got the same sound as 90% of the ppl.
The toms could have a little more work too, add a bit low end, a cut around 900hz and little boost around 4-5khz....And then add a bit of reverb to the drums so it doesnt sound too dry.
Lastly try using a bit of compression on ur master, it'll make the whole sound tighter as now it sounds a bit loose.
Cheers
Ak3r
. The first thing that surprises me is that u choose to put the clean guitar on the left...as beeing just 1 guitar the usual should be to put it in the center...otherwise seems a little weird but i guess that's more an artistic choice than any other thing.You should also check for some resonances on the bass like at 1:16 is very clear.
The Snare could have a bit more attack but that's the tricky part of this song. But dont worry, u got the same sound as 90% of the ppl.
The toms could have a little more work too, add a bit low end, a cut around 900hz and little boost around 4-5khz....And then add a bit of reverb to the drums so it doesnt sound too dry.
Lastly try using a bit of compression on ur master, it'll make the whole sound tighter as now it sounds a bit loose.
Cheers
Ak3r