25-03-2024, 07:25 PM
Hey ERJEE, surprised that you came back to your version 4 which seemed (seems) to be a good mix.
I listened carefully to version 5 and inevitably I discovered things that I had not detected in V4 but which appear ( curiously) more blatantly in this V5.
From the beginning of the title there is intermittently a kind of background noise characterized in the following way: like a sound of fingers sliding on the neck of a guitar, a kind of "swipp" enhanced with a delay. So very audible.
On the other hand, your acoustic guitars are very powerful but practically disappear when you switch to mono (2'19). Check it.
And to finish, the guitar solo at the end of the title seems quite timid to me compared to the impressive accompaniment of the guitars, electric and acoustic.
Maybe this V5 is not a good idea. This is a phenomenon that is quite commonly seen with so many revisions. A first draft, OK, not bad, small things to correct. With a third revision, the changes appear less and less obvious and convincing. As much as we have the energy (and faith) in the first version, it disappears in future versions where we seek to improve things, which really were not to be improved. Just my opinion.
But Cheers !
Franz
I listened carefully to version 5 and inevitably I discovered things that I had not detected in V4 but which appear ( curiously) more blatantly in this V5.
From the beginning of the title there is intermittently a kind of background noise characterized in the following way: like a sound of fingers sliding on the neck of a guitar, a kind of "swipp" enhanced with a delay. So very audible.
On the other hand, your acoustic guitars are very powerful but practically disappear when you switch to mono (2'19). Check it.
And to finish, the guitar solo at the end of the title seems quite timid to me compared to the impressive accompaniment of the guitars, electric and acoustic.
Maybe this V5 is not a good idea. This is a phenomenon that is quite commonly seen with so many revisions. A first draft, OK, not bad, small things to correct. With a third revision, the changes appear less and less obvious and convincing. As much as we have the energy (and faith) in the first version, it disappears in future versions where we seek to improve things, which really were not to be improved. Just my opinion.
But Cheers !
Franz