I don't like it. I mean it's super minimalistic mix and it doesn't sound like a studio production at all, it sounds more like a demo tape recorded somewhere in a garage. The mix is heavy in midrange, especially the vocals sound very nasal. The drums are the weakest element, completely lifeless, have no punch they sound a bit like they were recorded with 1 room mic. They also don't feel glued to the rest of the tracks. The guitar amp tracks in this recording already sound good on their own and imo require almost no processing so they are kinda saving the day here. There's a lot of distortion going on with the kick/snare hits which is even more obvious in the second version of your mix. It's so apparent it makes me think you did that on purpose, but I don't understand why because imo it doesn't sound good at all.
best of luck
best of luck