Please give some tips on my mix

[pritish19076]

to me it sounds a bit overcompressed, its pumping and theres a loss of bottom end, also it seems a bit thin and lacks width more seperation in the instruments might help. The vocal seems overpowered maybe bring the mix on the reverb down.
Could you take a listen to mine? i am also just beginning and have only headphones for reference
https://discussion.cambridge-mt.com/show...?tid=40485

I took your advices and came up with this. Does it sound better?