Chris Coltraine - Heather Jane

[Jimmy]

Hello, as I said before I am new to this forum and trying to get in touch with colleagues about the different ways of mixing and sound engineering. Can someone please help me with what I need to do because so far my first mix has been heard but no one has commented on it. I didn't like the distorted guitar in the first mix and also the melody guitar didn't have the space I envision for this song, so I did a second mix.