21-12-2014, 01:17 AM
06-01-2015, 02:52 PM
- it's overcompressed and distorted
- the bass drum eats a lot of your bass guitar which makes your harmonies sound kind of undefinied; choose another sample or make it at least lengthwise tighter and remove some unnecessary frequencies
- the backing vocals should feel like one instrument, but your choice of volume settings and panning tears them apart; also consider to tune these tracks, an automated pitch corrector did the job for me
- the wah-wah automation doesn't sound very convincing to me; while playing around with some effects on the guitar i realized that sticking with one sound gave me the best results
- your mix is pretty roomy and muffled
- the bass drum eats a lot of your bass guitar which makes your harmonies sound kind of undefinied; choose another sample or make it at least lengthwise tighter and remove some unnecessary frequencies
- the backing vocals should feel like one instrument, but your choice of volume settings and panning tears them apart; also consider to tune these tracks, an automated pitch corrector did the job for me
- the wah-wah automation doesn't sound very convincing to me; while playing around with some effects on the guitar i realized that sticking with one sound gave me the best results
- your mix is pretty roomy and muffled