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My try :

The pad sounds silky, the vocal is too dry its not good enough to be the star. I think the kick is a bit strong in the subs and the bass is missing out, its not easy with these tracks to get it right and dont think i have myself. This is quite close tonally to how i have done mine and very close to how i wanted it. Its a good mix for me you could afford make it louder.

Hi!
The balance feels right.
I would like to hear more the bass synth, did u high-passed?
try to make it a bit louder.
Cheers!