This song has an awesome vibe!
Update V2 - Decided to remix this one
I think the low end needs cleaning up. Kick sounding very muddy and is making the bass struggle. The stereo field feels like it wants to open up more but is being restrained somehow. I'd listen to the reference track and check the separation on that. I personaly think the low end on several tracks is what's making me feel this way about it.
Hope this helps.