I agree with some of the comments about the guitars being too distorted, it just lacks the transients to bring the guitar forward without turning it into a comped sausage.
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Otherwise, again a very successful song!
hello here is my tiny bit of feedback.
I'm missing bass on your mix. I think a great way for you to formulate the volume of it is to hear a reference song and compare.
Vocals lack the presence because of the reverb. I'm not sure if you placed reverb on the master track or in both vocals and master bus. I'm hearing everything with too much reverb almost as if you placed a speaker in a bathroom and recorded it in there.
Balances for the most part are very solid, Is just the reverb that is killing a ton of that definition in the balances.
As for the distortion guitars Yes there is quite a bit too much top end on them, but you can manage just fine by taming them down a couple of db's in that area.
keep it up I think you are on the right track.
(18-07-2023, 04:46 AM)RolH Wrote: [ -> ][quote pid='125077' dateline='1689629145']
can u define "bass" better
- more low end
- bass as an instrument
- missing fundament
- which frequency exactly
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I meant low end. Perhaps your mix is way too bright that sonically is leaving no room for low mids and low end.
I think is better now. I noticed there is a bass synth in the verse that is not there. Maybe is too low. Bringing it up will make the version far more full sounding.