13-04-2023, 02:09 AM
15-05-2023, 07:57 PM
Hello,
I'm a beginner, so my remarks may not be accurate.
Here's what I hear :
It's pumping / on the piano.
The voice needs to be cleaned (it's messy). (eq, breath, deesser)
In the beginning, the bass is drowned (why so low?), covered by the voice.
I can't clearly hear the cello on the choruses (only the violin)
On the choruses, there's too much energy on the high frequencies (it's aggressive).
I'm a beginner, so my remarks may not be accurate.
Here's what I hear :
It's pumping / on the piano.
The voice needs to be cleaned (it's messy). (eq, breath, deesser)
In the beginning, the bass is drowned (why so low?), covered by the voice.
I can't clearly hear the cello on the choruses (only the violin)
On the choruses, there's too much energy on the high frequencies (it's aggressive).
16-05-2023, 10:03 PM
(15-05-2023, 07:57 PM)hello thanks for your comment, you are right, my equipment is precarious but with the headphones I discovered my problems in this mix, the first version does not have much compression which justifies this pumping and in the second version I used plugins more focused on analogues which it made it more dirty and tangled, but I confess that Ill try to improve it with another songShenwoody Wrote: [ -> ]Hello,
I'm a beginner, so my remarks may not be accurate.
Here's what I hear :
It's pumping / on the piano.
The voice needs to be cleaned (it's messy). (eq, breath, deesser)
In the beginning, the bass is drowned (why so low?), covered by the voice.
I can't clearly hear the cello on the choruses (only the violin)
On the choruses, there's too much energy on the high frequencies (it's aggressive).