03-10-2021, 02:13 PM
04-10-2021, 04:41 PM
Hi:)
Here are some things I would work on, some are personal preference:
- Vocals feels a bit LOFI (especially second half), distant and lack some body. I miss that intimacy, especially in the first half of the verse
- Hat/Snap is a bit too loud
- Buildup is muddy
- Chorus lacks energy in comparison to the buildup
- I miss the main synth in the chorus
- Acoustic guitar feels out-of-place. The whole second verse is very messy
- Transition to the second verse is too loud
- Second chorus lacks energy in comparison to the buildup too
Here are some things I would work on, some are personal preference:
- Vocals feels a bit LOFI (especially second half), distant and lack some body. I miss that intimacy, especially in the first half of the verse
- Hat/Snap is a bit too loud
- Buildup is muddy
- Chorus lacks energy in comparison to the buildup
- I miss the main synth in the chorus
- Acoustic guitar feels out-of-place. The whole second verse is very messy
- Transition to the second verse is too loud
- Second chorus lacks energy in comparison to the buildup too