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After a long time of being unable to  mix and be creative i  found this  song and wanted to give it a try.
Haven´t mixed song from other than my self for a very long time. So this was a challenge... i thought. I got many ideas what i wanna do and they´ve turned out to work. for me!

Please be kind and don´t behead me in an instance. Still learning and did this mix with 99% with headphones. 
Never done that before and haven´t heard my mix on a proper stereo or my pc speakers for that matter. 
So how does it turn out ?
Kind regards from Sweden!

no mix

(03-08-2021, 08:46 AM)Imagine Mix Studio Wrote: [ -> ]no mix

Damn it!

The file was attached before uploading my mix and comment.
Will repost with my mix shortly. 

Add to first post: no reference material were used. Had a listen to
the mix on my pc speakers and guitars needs more bottom
Lower amb to snare and vocals up with presence!

EDIT: File attached

Also coming out of a creative retirement with this song, Taking a listen now

big thing that jumps out is missing vocal clarity a low of low end on them

i think it could also benefit from some more heavy bus compression and glue it all together aggressively

i will be uploading mine soon when complete