Lovely tune! Here is mine:
Hey Crow!
What up. Good mix pal.
Also like the guitars. Yeaaah!
Hey mate!
Thanks! nice awsome that you liked the guitars.
Hey I like that you added some effects, it definitely gives it a different feel than the other mixes.
If anything it feels like things are a little unbalanced, at times the guitars are quiet and synths are loud.
The drums need a bit of life, trust me they need a lot of EQ and compression.